People think watching movies is a waste of time. do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the overwhelming majority of the population watches films as part of their entertainment activities.
However
, some people consider watching pictures as a useless and futile type of leisure. In this
essay, I will attempt to shed light on the perspectives of this
issue.
In this
modern generation , Social media and watching cinema is playing a vital role in the life of every individual physically ,emotionally and socially but people are unaware of its devastating consequences in the future. Firstly
, watching shows to a certain limit is quite well for fun and entertainment and it's said to have desirable outcomes, but can lead to mental issues when exposed for a longer time . For instance
, Researches conducted by scientists in the USA points that half of the children in the US suffer autism when exposed to television shows for a longer time. Moreover
, certain violent videotapes when exposed to children of younger minds can cause them to implement the same behaviours shown in the movie. Obesity has reached its peak among children of age 12- 13 in recent years which highlights the exposure to television shows. Lack of interest in education rather than spending most of the time on television is prominently dominated in today's era.
To sum up, I would like to say that features nowadays is having stupid concepts and mainly focus on entertainment, and not on spreading awareness in society. They were made to spread knowledge about historical happenings in the past.Submitted by irshade11 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite