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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of metropolitan while others says housing facilities should be build instead. Do you agree of disagree?

#trees #environment #people #areas #facilities
Planting
trees
 are necessary for the environment,
Although
 many populations believe that
trees
 should be planted in the available lands in the metropolitan municipality or municipal areas,few people opinion housing facilities should be
instead
.In my opinion,disagree with the statement.
To begin
 with,out of all the arguments,the strongest one to prove my view is to encourage society to plant
trees
 in urban areas.
This
 is to say to save the city life for the upcoming future.A good example of
this
 is tress absorb the Co2 and releases the oxygen for human needs.
Besides
this
, it is
also
 true that
trees
 protecting from global warming.By ,
this
 I mean human activity is a major factor in the rise of greenhouse gases.
On the other hand
,to prove my point is in summer we can expect more weather conditions because if we cut down the
trees
 and constructing the buildings.In recent, reports tells that major cities have facing flooding and droughts may become more common.
For instance
, in ,India large developed areas like Hyderabad are extending the city life to merge all villages into the region,
as a result
, there is no
trees
 or plants in most of the colonies and these modern changes causing year floods in the city roads.
In addition
, the fact that ignoring environmental life is
also
 logical.
On the contrary
, some people country claim the mentioned support.The foremost argument they do is to create awareness about environmental safety.Government should pass the bill to prefer the environment safety slogan,
also
 establish the parks in every street and should be protected.
Thus
,to wrap up the discussion, it can be said that despite planting
trees
 and building construction,my reasons are that environment safety and housing facilities are logically acceptable.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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