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Health experts claim that walking is the best exercise. However, people are walking less on a daily basis. What has made this happen and how to deal with it?

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In
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 day and age,
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 are not interested to walk even though scientists the world over put emphasis on walking in order to deter many fatal diseases and stay fit.
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 is mainly happening down to following a modern and hectic lifestyle.
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,
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 a type of menacing inclination may be tackled by conducting awareness programmes. Much as there are a plethora of decisive advantages of regular walking, individuals are reluctant to do it only because of the contemporary lifestyle in which they have lots of work pressure.
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, so as to survive in
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 dog-eat-dog world successfully, a person must have to toil in his or her career, leaving him or her less time to exercise. As a consequence,
people
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, nowadays, less focus on walking with a view to competing and earning a decent emolument. To cite an example, an empirical study conducted by Oxford University reveals that 95% of professionals know the upside of exercising as well as walking, but they do not want to sacrifice their valuable time for
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 activity in that they want to devote their time to more productive areas. To reverse
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 undesirable state of affairs, governments ought to wage intensive campaigns in order to make citizens conscious of the value of fitness.
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 can be done by portraying dramas or shows where an individual has earned a lot of money through hard-working but cannot enjoy his wealth because of physical illness. So, what is the money for when it cannot secure
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health and bring peace in life? I fi
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 got chances to watch real-life or practical examples, it would be easier to exhort them to walk regularly. To exemplify, 90% of Chinese citizens now walk regularly in the morning after the successful awareness programme carried out by the health ministry. In conclusion, inasmuch as
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 have to do many tasks so as to compete in the ferocious job market, they cannot walk regularly.
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 awful situation can only be ameliorated by effective awareness campaigns.
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