More and more people are moving to big cities these days. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city.

The given topic is highly controversial.
However
, If a glance is taken at the pros and of
this
aspect , it is irrefutable to say there are numerous
people
prefer from villages to big
cities
So , I perceive that , it a lot of disadvantages rather than the advantages . I hereby give the following arguments to support myself. Commencing with
First
and foremost point in the list of my knowledge is that , If Individual
prefer
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prefers

The plural verb prefer does not appear to agree with the singular subject Individual. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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from a rural
area
to the urban
area
then
they face a lot of problems
such
as traffic jam , Increase the population in
cities
and
also
they fight each other because they need more space to live in the city . Apart from
this
, if
people
come to the city
then
they can need more space after they need to change park to building's after that , they can not walk in parks and
also
children can not play outdoor games and they face heath related problems .
this
type of pros if
people
move in
cities
.
Furthermore
, there are some advantages associated with it as well .
firstly
, if
people
came to
cities
then
, they can get a lot of benefits ,
for example
, they can get good transport and
also
their children can study the best university , good hospitals and so on .
In addition
to
this
, they can know how to live in
cities
and
also
they know discipline because
on the other hand
in a rural
area
has no discipline and
any
Correct quantifier usage
no

It seems that quantifier use may be incorrect here.

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rules. After analyzing the matter it would be right to say that despite few advantages , many disadvantages offer rank higher . Though , they should live in villages and Government should bring all facilities in
cities
So,
people
can not move in an urban
area
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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