Nowadays, because of digital technology, it is possible for not only studios but also individuals to produce their own films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

New inventions in technology and science
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providing the youngsters
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chance to start their own
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business
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costless camera can be used by any individual to make short movies. Some
people
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positive thinking whilst another disapprove
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fact.
This
essay will explain how improvements in
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world
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building
this
generation to be independent at an early age and can show their talent to
people
.
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digital advancements can help
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individuals to overcome
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dependency on their guardians or a
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job. To full fill their small needs they
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ask
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from their parents or have to do a part job.
However
, by taking the help of
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cameras
they can make clips or shoot short movies which they later can post on the applications like youtube, tik tok etcetera which will pay them according to the views their content got.
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, youtube has been
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of
people
nowadays and an add on source for the official producers to make
money
except the theatres.
Furthermore
, social media has been a platform for many
people
to earn a ticket to play a role in the
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,
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or any other film industry
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now. The small dancing or singing, acting videos posted on social media by various
people
forged with the
camers
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cameras
camera
of their mobile phones or portable ones, are seen by the known producers in search of talent for their movies.
For instance
,
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tik-tok platform has been really
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make
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a mark and become a source for the talent scout team to look for their upcoming actors, singers. To sum up, technology in every
beckground
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background
has lifted the standard for humans if it has been used in the right way. In
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way, if digitalness
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by
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that can aid them to do
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out of box thing
then
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a development we want.
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