Nowadays, because of digital technology, it is possible for not only studios but also individuals to produce their own films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
New inventions in technology and science
is
providing the youngstersChange the verb form
are
a
chance to start their own Add the preposition
with a
buisness
with even little Correct your spelling
business
money
such
as a
costless camera can be used by any individual to make short movies. Some Change the article
the
people
believe this
is a
positive thinking whilst another disapprove Remove the article
apply
this
fact. Change preposition
of this
This
essay will explain how improvements in digital
world Add an article
the digital
a digital
is
building Change the verb form
are
this
generation to be independent at an early age and can show their talent to people
.
To begin
with, this
digital advancements can help Correct determiner usage
these
the
individuals to overcome Correct article usage
apply
the
dependency on their guardians or a Correct article usage
apply
part time
job. To full fill their small needs they Add a hyphen
part-time
have
ask Add the particle
tohave
money
from their parents or have to do a part job. Change preposition
for money
However
, by taking the help of camers
they can make clips or shoot short movies which they later can post on the applications like youtube, tik tok etcetera which will pay them according to the views their content got. Correct your spelling
cameras
For example
, youtube has been money
bank for Correct article usage
a money
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
people
nowadays and an add on source for the official producers to make money
except the theatres.
Furthermore
, social media has been a platform for many people
to earn a ticket to play a role in the hollywood
, Change the capitalization
Hollywood
bollywood
or any other film industry Change the capitalization
Bollywood
from
Change preposition
for
Correct your spelling
quite
quiet
Correct your spelling
quite
some time
now. The small dancing or singing, acting videos posted on social media by various Replace the word
sometime
people
forged with the camers
of their mobile phones or portable ones, are seen by the known producers in search of talent for their movies. Correct your spelling
cameras
camera
For instance
, an
tik-tok platform has been really Change the article
a
Correct your spelling
make
makes
maked
a mark and become a source for the talent scout team to look for their upcoming actors, singers.
To sum up, technology in every Correct your spelling
made
beckground
has lifted the standard for humans if it has been used in the right way. In Correct your spelling
background
same
way, if digitalness Add an article
the same
used
by Add a missing verb
is used
this
generation in way
that can aid them to do Add an article
a way
the way
a
out of box thing Change the article
an
then
I reckon its
a development we want.Correct your spelling
it's
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