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Most university graduates earn more money than less well educated people. Some people argue that this means they should pay the full cost of their education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Although
 airlines are the fastest public transportation, the
carbon
 emission by air is much larger than by
car
. I believe that cancel some not essential flights will have more remarkable impacts than
car
 restrictions in
disposing
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 global warming. There are several alternative approaches of air transportation that without damaging the connection between two cities but consume less fuel since they running on the floor
instead
 of taking off from the land. From the physical prospect, a business
airplane
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aeroplane
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 weighs nearly 40 tons, and launching it from land will generate numerous
carbon
 dioxide because we need to guarantee
having
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 sufficient large acceleration to start the
airplane
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aeroplane
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.
However
, driving a
car
 on the land just need to take limited force even human can push the
car
 by hand. If we reduce the number of flights, the emission of
carbon
 dioxide will reduce dramatically thereby preventing
the
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global warming as
carbon
 dioxide in the atmosphere will interfere
the
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 heat spread from earth to the universe. By diminishing the causes of global warming, some extreme weather like drought or floods will be avoided.
In addition
, comparing with the restriction of
car
 usage, the negative effect of reducing the number of flights is lesser, especially for some inland cities. Using vehicles to travel to another city is popular and people can enjoy the scenery on the road. If cancel some airline, visitors can use alternative approaches like driving
car
, taking bus or train which will consume less fuel and still can reach the destination. Not only can these options prevent
from
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fierce
carbon
 emissions but remain a strong connection between
two
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 cities. In conclusion, stoping some unnecessary airlines
instead
 of restricting
car
 ownership to protect the environment is considerable.
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