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The gap between the rich and the poor is growing. What problems does this create? What can be done to tackle them?

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Some sections in America have a
curfew
 which is defined for the youngsters are not allowed to be outside at
night
 when at a specific time. They are not able to go out except
going
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 along with their parents. In my point of view, I think it depends on what situation they are living in,and another reason is young
people
 have the opportunity to be a part of a crime when they go outside at
night
.
Firstly
, I believe if the areas which they live in have high security, the
curfew
 will not be implemented.
Therefore
, when the government announces a
curfew
, it is evident
this
 region has some violent situations. The safety of
people
, especially the young aged is the priority for the government, so the
curfew
 should apply to
this
 area.
For example
, Bangkok, where I live, has a protest. The
curfew
 is used by the administrator. To protect teenagers who are not over 18 years old, they are not allowed to go outside at
night
.
Secondly
, because a large number of criminals happen at
night
, so to protect young
people
 from being a part of
crime
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the crime
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, banning them from going out of their place after a specific time is better. Even though some
people
 argue that it is a restriction of their freedom, but I consider it has more advantages than disadvantages. Because teenagers are not mature enough, sometimes they make wrong decisions. All in all, I believe applying the
curfew
 will depend on what happens in your town, and to reduce the chance of young
people
to commit
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 crimes, banning them from being out of the doors at
night
 is another way to use.
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