With the increased global demand for oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

Today, the demand for fossil-based fuels is increasing rapidly.
Therefore
, to access more
resources
unexplored territories should be opened up.
However
, while I believe that the demand for
oil
and
gas
has increased tremendously, and new territories will help to improve the situation, I think that it will cause massive ecological issues.
First
of all, discovering new sources of
oil
and
gas
would cause problems associated with global warming. Digging enormous areas will increase the likelihood of temperature increase, which will result in melting ice caps.
This
will lead to flooding, famines and major global problems.
Moreover
, these kinds of
resources
will increase emissions into the atmosphere which will strengthen the likelihood of many diseases from tuberculosis to cancer.
Secondly
, countries that rely on the usage of non-renewable natural
resources
of
energy
will not be motivated to use ecologically clean
energy
resources
.
As a result
, after mining the deposits of
oil
and
gas
, they will not be as expensive as they are now.
Therefore
, prices for these
resources
will fall tremendously and it will encourage other countries to use them.
For instance
, Germany has planned to switch to wind and solar
energy
instead
because of the rapid depletion of fossil fuels. I believe that exploitation of ecologically clean
resources
of
energy
would improve the situation To conclude, while some think that the discovery of new deposits of
gas
and
oil
will improve the situation with the scarcity of mineral
resources
, I am of the opinion that it will lead to massive global problems from flooding to climate change.
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  • global demand
  • finite resources
  • energy consumption
  • exploiting
  • untouched ecosystems
  • carbon emissions
  • climate change
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable energy solutions
  • geopolitical consequences
  • territorial disputes
  • dependency
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