Some people believe it is better to study subjects that have practical applications. Others, however, think it is better to study subjects that are theoretical. Discuss both views.

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Nowadays, most countries have
the
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legislation
of
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banning smoking in public areas, and many
people
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think it is acceptable that if the smoker would like to
smoke
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, they must leave the place.
Writer
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agrees with
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policy because
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ban is able to protect
people
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who do not
smoke
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from secondhand
smoke
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, and it can reduce the frequency of smoking. The
first
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reason is to protect
people
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who do not
smoke
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from secondhand
smoke
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because many non-smoking
people
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cannot avoid spending time with smokers in their daily life. It may
also
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be possible to take secondhand
smoke
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from their colleagues or family. For
this
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reason, some
people
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have a chance to get lung cancer.
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, my aunt who is a non-smoking person lived with her smoking husband
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and took a breath
with
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toxic air from his
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. After
that
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she got lung cancer, and she still has been cured of the disease. Another reason is numerous smokers usually
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more than 3 times per day, so finding a place to
smoke
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is important for them. The law
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banning smoking in public areas is significant to decrease the frequency of smoking. Because of the fact that it is hard to find a place to
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.
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, some of them reduce
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smoke
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their smoke
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to once a day when they come back home.
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, one of my colleagues used to
smoke
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all the time when he was in a club, but since
this
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ban has been announced, it is no longer legal to
smoke
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in public areas. He changed to smoking only twice when he went to a party. All in all, I totally agree with
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ban because it prevents non-smoking
people
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from secondhand
smoke
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, and assists smokers to reduce
frequency
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to
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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