Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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modern era, more and more folks would like to be an entrepreneur

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of working in an organisation,

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trend is quite become famous for the

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two decades among people.

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is because they want to prove their's talent and creative mind through their own business. The main cons of unstable profit and solo maintenance.

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with, there are two key reasons for choosing self-employed rather than doing a monotonous job.

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, people like to expose to their's talent through their's trade.

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, one of the top companies in the world which are Microsoft,

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deal founder

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have worked in a software company after that he has started his own business

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, now he gives a lot of employment opportunity to youngsters.

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, if a person doing a task in an enterprise, he does not think out of the box

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as creative thought but he starts a new commercial while he thinks a lot, how to develop the commercial among the population and how to get more profit.

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trend has some drawbacks.

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, the businessman might not be gotten a fixed profit like office goers, sometimes they get lost from the trade.

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, the beer enterprise company of India which is KingFishers CEO Mr Vijay Mallaiya has lost his deal for bank debt.

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, the solo maintenance is the biggest troubles for an entrepreneur because no one support and they do all kind of task

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, getting depression. To conclude, the population would like to run their own commercial

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of working in an organisation,

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situation has more benefits to the founder even though,

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tendency has some drawbacks though earning a fixed salary. I hope

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tendency is conducive to brings a lot of new persons will start to the own deal.

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