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the design of a modern landfill for household waste. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

#design #landfill #household #waste #information #features #comparisons
The diagram gives some data about the view of a contemporary landfill for household waste. Overall, the
process
 commences from a man-made hole in natural
rock
 and finish in natural
rock
 with some
process
 for closure. Let us take a look at the construction in
this
 diagram.
Firstly
,
this
process
 begins in natural
rock
 from the man-made hole, after is synthetic substance and it has got 2 kinds of material. One of them is a drainage piper and the other is a drainage tank.
Lastly
 in construction is clay.
Moreover
, there are 2 stages for getting a result. One of them is the
using
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process
 in
the
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household waste. There are some materials like waste, liquid and clay.
Finally
, the
last
 stage is the closure for getting a consequence. There are some parts in the closure, an example clay, gases, pipes in natural
rock
. It is the final for the design of a contemporary landfill.
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