Write a letter to local council regarding the plan of replacement of a library with a supermarket, you need to write the following: -where did you get this information -the disadvantages of having a supermarket instead of a library -importance of having a library

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I am writing
this
letter to express my grave concern regarding constructing a
supermarket
instead
of a
library
. Recently, I have read about
this
news in the Daily Hunt newspaper of our area. I am Deepti Sahu, a resident of Vijaya Nagar, Hyderabad. I would like to explain the drawbacks of a
supermarket
in our area. There are many supermarkets which can fulfil the need of residents.
Also
, adding one more store would create a lot of noise whereas the
library
is an urgent requirement of all age group people. Another drawback is the location, constructing
supermarket
in the city centre will result in traffic congestion, and will cause inconvenience to pedestrians.
However
, at the current moment,
this
library
is a must for young, elderly and middle-aged people in
this
area.
This
library
is 10 years old and benefitted many people from neighbouring and various areas. Most of them tend to read in a quiet place where they have access to good quality material.
Additionally
, children
also
go to the
library
to find out useful information to complete their assignments. I,
therefore
, request you to reconsider the plan of constructing a
supermarket
rather than the
library
. Looking forward to a prompt and positive response. Yours faithfully, Deepti Sahu
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