Nowadays,some parents pressure their children to be successful. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

In today's competitive world,
younger
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generation is being forced by their
parents
to be victorious in every aspect of their life. There are many factors responsible for
such
enforcement and according to me, it is a negative development in many
children
while it can be positive for
few
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of them.
Firstly
, the world today is full of distractions due to technological advancement. Social media can be the reason for
parents
to behave in
such
manner
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. Even
parents
are in competition with each other for their
children
.
For instance
, if a parent
earn
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well and is a famous personality, they are always conscious about their
child
's future as it can get them a bad name if the
child
is not keeping
upto
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up to
their level.
Secondly
,
progress
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of other's
children
can
also
be the factor for
pressurisng
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pressurising
pressuring
their own
children
,
moreover
, the investments in education
is
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too high compared to previous times making
parents
to always expect their
child
to be triumphant. According to
me
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, it is more of a negative impact on today's younger generation. Kids are believing that how much ever they acquire,
there
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parents
always hope for more.
Moreover
,
this
concept can hide your
children
's real talent and personality as they are under constant supervision and pressure
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their
parents
. As a matter of fact, every
child
is different from one another and should not be compared.
Nevertheless
, guardians can always guide and support them in their
need
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needs
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to make them flourish and be successful. Albeit, some amount of rigidity is
also
necessary for
the
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fruitful upbringing but there must not be any set targets in
parents
mind
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as
children
are not projects. To conclude, nowadays rules of parenting have completely changed and they are needed to sensitively and diplomatically. Any sort of pressure can bring out the ignorant and rebellious side of them thereby leading to more serious negative consequences.
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