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Some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the Internet and that governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

#people #right #access #internet #governments #services
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The majority of
people
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 use the
internet
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 nowadays. While some
people
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 argue that
internet
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access
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 is everyone’s right and
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 the
government
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 should provide it free of cost, others argue that it is not a right and
people
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 should pay for it. In my opinion, providing free
internet
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 services is a waste of public funds as there are other more important needs. There is no denying the fact that the
internet
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 has revolutionized our lives. Nowadays we cannot even imagine a world without the
internet
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. It has now become
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 an integral part of our lives that we use it for everything from accessing news and information to connecting with friends and family. Even so, it is not a good idea to provide free
internet
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 service especially in countries where millions of
people
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 still do not have
access
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 to basic needs like food, education, shelter or healthcare. The
internet
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 is a useful invention, but it is not an indispensable service and it is possible to live without
access
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 to the
internet
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.
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,
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 of wasting tax money on a useful yet dispensable service like the
internet
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, the
government
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 should focus on other areas that health and education. Its priority should be saving the homeless
people
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 and those who suffer from poverty and hunger.
People
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 who need the
internet
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 can
access
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 it by paying for it. Of course, the
government
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 can provide free
internet
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 in schools, libraries and other public places to make sure that poor
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also
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 have
access
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 to it. Beyond that, there is no need to provide it free of cost to all
people
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. In the end, I would like to conclude that free
internet
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access
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 is not a right or necessity.
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, in my opinion, the
government
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 should provide free
access
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 to food, education and healthcare.
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