Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Studying other fields at university that will be support
students
in the
future
plays an increasingly essential role in today’s society. It is argued that others believe that they can choose the course from their passion. Both of these views have arguments and
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such
as computer science will help
students
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competitive for their
future
work
. If employees have other hard
skills
such
as computer
skills
, the chance they will get a job is
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. An illustration of
this
is that a new jobber who has
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extra computer
skills
, Microsoft office or advanced statistics like SPSS or R, will have more possibility to get that job.
Moreover
, a
further
aspect of studying other subjects apart from their
field
is the way to demonstrate their
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for cope with other problems that could not predict.
This
shows that
students
who can study
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subjects
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college must face
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other critical thinking subjects than others who study only one
field
.
In contrast
, some opponents may argue that
students
who learn from their
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will acquire a good attitude when they studied that support them to perform
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better
work
in their performance.
Consequently
,
students
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freedom to select a course they prefer. Perhaps
this
is true, but it cannot be denied that only hard
skills
that relate to
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field
will not enough to stand in the
next
future
work
because technology decade is coming to
this
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field
might
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to perform
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.
However
, I personally believe that learning other hard
skills
will need to be allowed.
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should have compulsory courses that can be utilized
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future
work
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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