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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#country #language
It is argued that
people
 who are non-native speakers or who migrate to another
country
 suffer from
the
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social and practical issues. According to my point of view, I disagree with the statement. On one hand,
people
 who are willing to migrate to another
country
 will not suffer from any social problem because they will definitely work hard to make themselves capable to live in a different culture, they already would be aware of the different cultures and societies they are going to live in. Apart from ,that there are many countries that encourage immigrants who have a strong academic background.
For example
, if a person from India is willing to move to the United Kingdom, he will obviously change his way of thinking and living to meet the standard of the English
people
 he will try to think and speak more practically and softly.
Moreover
, a study has found that
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 there are around 40 % of
people
 immigrating to the United States of America on an H1-B visa,
this
country
 provides the opportunity to individuals who have a profound academic background but whose language proficiency is at intermediate or below that level.
On the other hand
, any individual be it a student or employee will not face any practical issues because he would obviously be aware of the academic and job requirements of a university or a firm.
For instance
, countries like Canada and Australia take language proficiency tests like IELTS as
a
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pre-requisites for
people
 who want to immigrate. To conclude, it is a myth that non-native speakers will face problems in a
country
 where they have migrated. If a person wants to move to a different province he or she will definitely make himself or herself capable enough to live up to the standard of a local of the
country
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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