More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. What are the most serious problems associated with obesity and what solutions can you suggest?

In many developed countries,

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number of children outweigh as compared to the standard level.

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is becoming

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urgent issue in

thier

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their

countries.

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essay will

dicuss

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discuss

both the most dangerous problems and the solutions

about

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obesity. At

first

, the

serios

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serious

series

problem of the youngsters, who have too much overweight in childhood, lead to poor health. That

mean

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they are likely to less concentrate

in

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the study,affecting

to

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apply

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uneffective

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development.

For instance

, a

healty

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healthy

individual is more effective

learning

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in learning

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rather than unhealthy

people

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.

Next

,

this

cause

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the

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negative mindsets in

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childhood

such

as fatty boy better than good shape. There are many solutions to solve

this difficulties

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including household, school and country

level

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levels

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.

Firstly

,

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their

parents should provide less fatty food for

thier

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their

the

kids,

such

as whole wheat bread and free-sugar snacks, and more activities to do with them,

such

as outdoor playing.

Next

, the teachers should teach students to be more aware of taking care

themselves

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of themselves

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, which are eating,exercise with a good mindset.

Moreover

, The schools should set a subject supporting the students to love

thier

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their

taking care of themselves.

Lastly

, the

goverment

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government

should launch and promote

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healthy campaign

to

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the citizens,

such

as spending leisure time with

thier

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their

family in the park, which

support

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a

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more movement as mentioned above.

Furthermore

, healthy living in

thier

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their

the

countries leads to many companies producing more well foods in the future. In summary, too much weight is not totally appropriate in their childhood which leads to under standard of the improvement and poor perspectives in the youngsters.

This

issue should be clarified in each

sectors

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sector

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including household, schooling system and

the

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goverment

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government

operations. Those will be gradually supporting

adapation

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adaptation

to become a positive trend.