Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent to you agree or disagree with this statement?

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people

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argue that there are highly lots of options for contemporary

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.

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view deserves a significant topic of discussion by ordinary citizens as well as politicians in terms of

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and disadvantages of the capitalistic society. As

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representative citizen of

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in South Korea, I partly agree with the statement above. The reasons why are as follows. Undoubtedly, modern citizens in advanced nations are surrounded by material prosperity

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confronted with enormously more options than those of the past hundred years.

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, nowadays workers face

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of which meals

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as black bread, rice soup, and so on, are suitable for breakfast and lunch on their way to commute from early morning, whereas those in

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20th century are concerned about whether they could afford to eat something.

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, new products which had not existed before

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over the world to attract a number of consumers like

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smartphones

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, tablet

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, and etc, which push

people

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to have difficulties in selecting one of them.

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, more than half of the population on earth are suffered from severe poverty, which brings few

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to the

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residents of some societies with domestically low income. According to

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aids organization,

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of newborn babies gets to pass away in 1 week in undeveloped countries.

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, adults are less likely to seek

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decent jobs

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and remain poor lives due to underperformed economy.

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, many

people

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have

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or lack of

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, even with

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options compared to their ancestors in African nations. To conclude, the argument that

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have too many

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is persuasive when it comes to highly developed societies.

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, the rest of the world population have fewer

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than before.