Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent to you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some
people
argue that there are highly lots of options for contemporary people
. This
view deserves a significant topic of discussion by ordinary citizens as well as politicians in terms of advantages
and disadvantages of the capitalistic society. As Correct article usage
the advantages
an
representative citizen of Change the article
a
middle-class
in South Korea, I partly agree with the statement above. The reasons why are as follows.
Undoubtedly, modern citizens in advanced nations are surrounded by material prosperity Correct article usage
the middle-class
that is
confronted with enormously more options than those of the past hundred years. For example
, nowadays workers face choices
of which meals such
as black bread, rice soup, and so on, are suitable for breakfast and lunch on their way to commute from early morning, whereas those in early
20th century are concerned about whether they could afford to eat something. Correct article usage
the early
Furthermore
, new products which had not existed before come
over the world to attract a number of consumers like Change the verb form
coming
smartphone
, tablet Fix the agreement mistake
smartphones
computer
, and etc, which push Fix the agreement mistake
computers
people
to have difficulties in selecting one of them.
On the other hand
, more than half of the population on earth are suffered from severe poverty, which brings few choices
to the unfortune
residents of some societies with domestically low income. According to Correct your spelling
unfortunate
international
aids organization, Correct article usage
the international
one
Add a hyphen
one-third
third
of newborn babies gets to pass away in 1 week in undeveloped countries. Also
, adults are less likely to seek for
decent jobsChange preposition
apply
,
and remain poor lives due to underperformed economy. Remove the comma
apply
As a result
, many people
have shortage
or lack of Add an article
a shortage
choices
, even with less
options compared to their ancestors in African nations.
To conclude, the argument that Change the quantifier
fewer
people
have too many choices
is persuasive when it comes to highly developed societies. However
, the rest of the world population have fewer choices
than before.Submitted by redrock1980 on
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