Some people tell that to reduce the traffic and pollution, government should increase the tax on the petrol. Would there be more benefits than the drawback?

Many

peopole

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people

believe that one of the best

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to decrease the traffic and

polution

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pollution

is rising the cost of petrol. In spite of the significant merits of

this

method, I completely disagree with

this

opinion and think that in most cases the disadvantages

outweight

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outweigh

the advantages. Increasing fees of fossil fuel can be considered

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solution

for several reasons .The strongest reason

that

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this

proposition leads

people

to be less related

on

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vehicules

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vehicles

.To put it differently , the

hight

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high

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prices of gasoline

disencourage

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discourage

people

to drive their cars or take public

transprtorations

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transportations

.

Thus

, it can

helps

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to reduce using

vehicules

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vehicles

and

then

minimise pollution .

In addition

,

this

decision may inspire

people

to execute some useful activities .

For example

, the number of

people

who commence to walk or driving a bicycle will be increased and the traffic on road begin to

becom

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become

more

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less . That's why

this

solution

present

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some crucial

benfits

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benefits

to the human and environment .

However

, I believe that

this

decision has many drawbacks and

inconvenients

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inconveniences

inconvenience

.

Firstly

,

people

who are in difficult financial situation find more

problem

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to

exerce

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exercise

their daily activities . In other ways ,

person

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the person

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who

are

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in obligation to take transport will pay more money and in some cases can

engendre

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engender

a serious problem ,

such

as some students will be dropped their study because their family cannot

supprt

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support

the high prices of transportation .

Secondly

,

this

solution

may be

unfavourable

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the unfavourable

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economy of

th

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the

countrie

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country

countries

. In other ways , little

company

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companies

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or projets

who

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obligatory use the way of transportations will

be not motivate

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to continue their

busniess

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business

in

this

nation

taht

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that

presents a huge cost of

petrole

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petrol

petroleum

.

Consequently

,it can decrease investigating and discourage entrepreneur to start their business and

then

affects negatively economy of the nation . In conclusion , despite

of

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the diverse benefits of increasing tax of petrol on traffic and environment . I think that it presents

a

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plenty of serious negative impacts to the individual and society .