Write a letter to your friend about a book that you have read recently. Include the following in your letter: Describe the book. Why do you want him/her to read it? Tell him/her how to get the book.

Dear Ana, How are you doing? I hope all is going well.

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I was not able to write sooner because I got hooked up with a

book

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I found in our school library. I'm excited to share

this

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great

book

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that I found

while

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I was browsing through news articles for my school paper. Well,

this

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book

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is about the history of the Roman

empire

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Empire

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. I was so fascinated with

this

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book

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because there are a lot

revealing

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of revealing

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facts

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the

book

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apply

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which we did not learn in school. I know you will love

this

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book

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! You're

such

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a bookworm like me! To add,

that

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those facts that were revealed are so intriguing! So I will tell you to read it right away and you will thank me later for letting you know about it. There are two copies I found in the library and I told the librarian to reserve that

book

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for you. You can go straight ahead to the library and mention my name to her and she'll get the idea. I will be waiting to hear from you soon

and

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let me know your thoughts about the

book

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. See you soon! Warm regards, Alex

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single idea per paragraph

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for even clearer messaging.

logical structure

Enhance the logical connection between paragraphs for a smoother flow. For example, transition gently from describing the book to why it's recommended.

greeting and closing

Warm and friendly greetings and closing that suit the letter's purpose.

complete response

The letter responds comprehensively to all bullet points of the task prompt.

suitable writing tone

The writing showcases a suitable casual and friendly tone appropriate for personal letters to a friend.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

200 words

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