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Describe the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city.

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Nowadays, living in a city is great. There are a number of benefits and drawbacks of living in an urban
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. In
this
 essay, I am going to discuss these views. To start with,
cities
 are more developed and offer access to public amenities. All around the world, governments invest heavily
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building
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of
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public facilities and infrastructures. These social amenities include schools, hospitals and community
centers
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. Some of the best health facilities in Kenya,
for instance
, are found in the largest
cities
 like Nairobi and Mombasa. As
such
, dwellers are able to access
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high-quality education and health services.
Furthermore
, there are a wide variety of jobs for low and high-skilled people. Workers can be employed in industries, banks, hotels or supermarkets among others.
For example
, in Nairobi majority of the residents are working in
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area
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,
city
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center
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the transport sector.
On the other hand
, insecurity cases are rampant in
cities
. The level of high unemployment is high and
as a result
, unemployed youth engage in criminal activities. Like in Mombasa, young generations are selling illegal drugs and engaged in violent robberies. These activities make living in developed areas unsafe. In
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, environmental pollution is quite high. The rivers, land and air are heavily polluted
thus
 making the living environment unsuitable for habitation. The causes of pollution in
cities
 like New Delhi and Nairobi are transportation and manufacturing. To summarize, urban dwellers enjoy the benefits like good transportation,
high quality
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 services, access to employment. They
also
 face issues like insecurity and unconducive living spaces occasioned by environmental pollution.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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