Many people believe that bicycle is a healthy and environmentally-friendly mode of transport. However, it is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population?

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In contemporary society, it is believed by the majority of
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that cycling is a healthier and eco-friendly form of conveyance rather than other means of transport.
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mode of transportation in many places. There
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diverse
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of causes of
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the possible solutions which may be implemented to alleviate
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with, one of the prominent reasons unpopularity of riding a bike among people is that other
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of conveyances
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as modern vehicles, buses are more comfortable and prestigious. So that, it assists people to reach their need of destination faster and easier.
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,modern generations tend to lead a luxurious lifestyle.
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cars rather than bicycles is more likely to be
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prestigious. When it comes to possible solutions
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trade, in my view, the governments are more in charge of solving
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problem. The government may create extra lanes for cyclers to biking without any trouble. Another alternative possible solution would be advertising. Because it would make people more conscious of the advantages
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. If they
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aware that, overusing of vehicles have
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for our environment and
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of our environment is
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of everyone. To sum up, the main causes of unpopularity of bikes are being useless in far distances and prestigious.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cardiovascular fitness
  • muscle strengthening
  • mental well-being
  • reducing pollution
  • traffic congestion
  • fossil fuels
  • infrastructure
  • safety concerns
  • economic factors
  • bike lanes
  • bike-sharing programs
  • subsidies
  • public awareness campaigns
  • community programs
  • e-bikes
  • viable transportation option
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