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Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Admiration of sport and media
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 by youngsters is highly debated among
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 generation. Proponents of famous people claim
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the benefits of following the
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, while opponents point out the demerits. In the following paragraphs, I will explain why it is a positive trend as well as negative. There are numerous aspects of the public figures being the role models for today's youth. They could inspire them to change
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 lifestyles in a better way.
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, most
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daily participants of gym clubs and fitness
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. The strong body and healthy habits of
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 might be a great example of health and fit standards.
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,
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, in most cases, are rich, and they are able to encourage youngsters to invest money
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 charity purposes, thereby maintaining the health, study and social organizations.
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, famous figures demonstrate the
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 process for adolescents to achieve their goals, not just dreaming about it.
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, Shawn Mendes as known as
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 teenager singer manifests his way from a cover maker in 2012 to a world star by inspiring videos of his work during 10 years
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 in
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 field.
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, there are
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 some drawbacks providing by public humans.
Celebrities
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 tend to not bother about their acts and can show
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examples of misbehaviours
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 as smoking, drinking
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 alcohol, and so on. Undoubtedly, their activities might contribute to the problems among youth.
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, looking at famous figures, young people start to imitate their habits that lead to health issues and repercussions.
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, if
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 do not take responsibility for their actions, it could lead to hazardous effects. In conclusion, role models play an essential role in youth's lives, but
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 can show them not only positive
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 but
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 negative effects on their behaviour.
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,
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 should take responsibility for their actions in order to avoid issues among youngsters.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • media personalities
  • sports icons
  • role models
  • admiration
  • influence
  • behavior
  • mindset
  • values
  • unethical behavior
  • healthy lifestyles
  • social media platforms
  • celebrity culture
  • career aspirations
  • educational goals
  • positive change
  • ethical standards
  • amplify
  • idolize
  • public perception
  • impressionable
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