Children obesity is an increasing problem in Australia .As many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor what their students seat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that two out of

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Australian

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face a big problem about overweight.

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monitoring and workout activities are been a responsibility of the

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. I completely agree with

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opinion and think It is a direct responsibility of the

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to look after any

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by monitor their

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and control

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intake

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of all, exercise is the most important

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to control

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situation. Schools should plan or have classes to work out. Nowadays most

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spend time more than 8 hours in their

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for 5 days. It is almost 50% of their time per day. The exercise classes can promote their motivation to burn

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especially the

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give a special point if they can do it.

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, it is better if they have a friend to try

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loss

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together.

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of all,

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intake

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is a

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important

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in

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conditions. The

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intake

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should balance with their activities or

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outtake. Nutritionists should calculate the optimal

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intake

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balanced with their lifestyle. While

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should cook the ideal food for

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health.

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,

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are important factors to change them that become fat. Many

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interfere with the metabolism, digestion, and absorption processes. Routine health checks for

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other

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out should be performed in

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with obesity. Nowadays many reports have been published about

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that make obesity person

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as hormonal disturbance and gastrointestinal disorder.

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, all

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that are overweight should be examined by a doctor and/or nutritionist. In conclusion, the

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is an important

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to monitor

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weight

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and promote

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loss

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in the correct way. Balancing between

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outtake and

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are the essential steps for the dieter, as well as ,

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out other

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that become the pig problem about their

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.