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Is it useful to recycle glass bottles? Should people throw wasted bottle away? Your opinion

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In order to live a sustainable life and create a better future for our upcoming generations, recycling waste products have become vital.
However
, there are some questions about recycling the
glass
bottles
, whether they should be thrown away or collected to recycle and reuse.
This
 essay will
further
 discuss both the statements and my personal opinion on
this
 matter.
First
 of all, nowadays many companies in the market have switched to
glass
 packaging
instead
 of plastic ones. The sole purpose of the major shift was to avoid the usage of plastic and save the environment.
However
, if we do not find a way to reuse
glass
bottles
, the same question would arise in future about sustainable living.
For example
, currently, many soft drinks, medicines, hair oils, food items
such
 as tomato ketchup comes in a
glass
 bottle package. If we keep using these
bottles
 without an establishment of a process to recycle them, the world would be facing some major issues in the upcoming years. Recently, I visited a beach in Gujarat where the seashore was covered with empty
bottles
 of wine and beer that will be dragged into the sea during high tide and will harm creatures living in the sea. So, to find a balance between nature and human life, it is essential to recycle
glass
bottles
.
On the other hand
, some people believe that they should throw useless
bottles
. If we consider the drawbacks of keeping unwanted
glass
bottles
 in the house as compared to the safety of children, it is a valid argument.
For example
, if people keep waste
glass
bottles
 in the house and a child somehow manages to grab the bottle
then
 it could turn into a life treating accident since children have very thin skin and mirrors can easily temper the skin. So, in
such
 cases, it is important to throw away unwanted mirror jugs. In conclusion, considering the above-mentioned points, in my opinion, wasted mirror jars should be recycled to use again to ensure we do not harm our environment by creating excessive waste.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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