Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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hold the view that athletes deserve to be paid more

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others argue that there are other more important professions in which

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should be paid more.

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more inclined towards the latter. On

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hand, sports professionals have to do a lot of strenuous activities to earn money. They did not earn

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fame overnight, they

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tremendous efforts,

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fingers to bones, to reach the

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. I am convinced that not

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but fame is what brings them more money. Common

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worship and are intrigued by

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. Their popularity helps them to

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in several campaigns and advertisements.

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the other hand, scientists and

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in the healthcare industry dedicate their lives

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the betterment of

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society. Scientists spent night after night in laboratories to invent

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for several diseases. From increasing our longevity to making transport easier, they have helped us in various ways.

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, doctors and other healthcare workers prioritize our lives more than

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. They spent most of the day treating and serving patients. Given the COVID situation, we can see how doctors and nurses are selflessly looking after the infected

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contracting the dis virus, they are spending sleepless nights looking after the patients. Teachers

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deserve to be paid more as they play a crucial role in building the future leaders of the world.

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,

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sports professionals have to undergo a lot of

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painstaking

tasks to reach

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position, that does not make

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less than that. In my

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, there are other more important

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in which

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deserve to be paid more.