Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. What do you think are the reasons for these? What can be done to solve this issue?

With the advancement of technology lots of new social
media
platforms has been invented, which has changed the traditional ways of communication, nowadays,
instead
of communicating in
person
or through ,letter people prefer to use social
media
.
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essay will discuss how communicating through
internet
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has more benefits than
the
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cons.
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with
,
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is staying in touch with social
media
saves
alot
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a lot
of time, as in
this
hectic world no one got enough time to meet their loved
ones
regularly. So, knowing
their
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well being at will is an outrageous advantage,
for example
, if somebody fell ill or met an accident and one of a family member is out of station for whom
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not easy to be with their family immediately that
person
can easily stay updated about the health of their near
ones
.
Moreover
, as
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not easy to go abroad to watch a sports match one can just follow it through social
media
. On the flip side, face to face meet-ups helps to comprehend the feelings better, just having a chat or a call can not tell the state of mind of the
person
.
For example
, when you are present at a place you observe better you know better but on call or
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it is impossible. To conclude with,
although
both have their own advantages
but
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it is upon situation if it is possible for a
person
to see their dear
ones
in
person
than they should do that.
However
, in case a busy lifestyle does not allow
then
taking the help of advancement is a great way of asking about the well being of our family or near
ones
.
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