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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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In recent years, the trend has been changed towards
sports
, and now it is a professional career. A section of society has thought that these top-level sportsmen in popular
sports
 get
money
 in numerous ways. The total
income
 is much higher than other important professional careers is acceptable for the community.
However
, others argue that it is not justified for those
people
 who contribute more than these. According to my perspective, it is fair for players who earn more
money
 than others. In the course of the essay, I will discuss both viewpoints.
To begin
 with, those
people
 argue in support of other professions, and the main point is that popular athletes are not contributing to the development of society. Still, they earn more than those jobholders and the majority of business
people
 who are the backbone of the community. A jobholder works every day from sunrise to sunset. The total
income
 for a month is less than a match fee.
In addition
, they
also
 earn from tv commercials and brand sponsorship, which is insulting those workers. On the other side, they argue in favour of athletes and give points that players are famous due to
people
. They impress from their techniques and their own interest if they do not like they will not in light.
Moreover
, these athletes give their whole
life
 to
sports
, after decades of experience, they achieve that level of accuracy in
sports
 and have five to ten years to earn
money
 for their whole
life
, and he totally depends on
this
 earnings.
For example
, a sportsman starts to play at the age of fifteen, and he will publically admire at the age of thirty, and maybe he unfit for that sport after ten years. At the peak of his career, his
income
 was totally fair. He is
also
 an inspiration for the
next
 generation. In conclusion, those
people
 judge based on popular player
income
, they need to check his whole
life
 he gives to
this
sports
 and a small portion of his
life
 he huge amount
money
, and others who are not successful they give his
life
 to that sport.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial remuneration
  • exceptional
  • merit
  • talent
  • demand
  • entertainment value
  • career span
  • physical demands
  • justified
  • unfair
  • criticism
  • income inequality
  • societal priorities
  • sportsmanship
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