Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation why might this be the case what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed

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present, many individuals start to work as a self-employed,

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of being working for

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or organization.

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essay will discuss the main reasons for that and talk about the possible disadvantages of being self-employed. In my opinion,

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believe there are two main reasons for

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,

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felt more relax

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being self-employed.

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, working for a

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or organization required greater responsibility and higher

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team work

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skills,

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, it will feel

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more pressure working for a

company

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.

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, a

youtuber

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YouTuber

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doesn’t need to follow the working time of a

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, and they don’t require a lot of communication with their peers.

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, they might feel

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stresses

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.

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, the advance of technology has been allowed

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to do what they like to do. Like the social media of Youtube and Tiktok. These platforms

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very

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high

salary

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for

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creator

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,

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, even they don’t have

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official job, they still can do

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for living.

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, great artists can upload their works to the internet and someone will sponsor them for advertisement. That’s why more and more

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chose to be a freelancer. I would

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the biggest disadvantage of being self-employed is that they don’t have a sustainable income. when they are running out of talents, they might lose their ways of living.

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, when the fan number of a

youtuber

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YouTuber

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is dropping,

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this

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youtuber

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YouTuber

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might lose his sponsor. In conclusion,

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believe more and more

people

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choose to be self-employed has more positive effects than

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draw back

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, and it is a good way to increase job employment.