Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation why might this be the case what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed
In
present, many individuals start to work as a self-employed, Change preposition
At
instead
of being working for company
or organization. This
essay will discuss the main reasons for that and talk about the possible disadvantages of being self-employed. In my opinion, i
believe there are two main reasons for Change the capitalization
I
this
.
First
, people
felt more relax of
being self-employed. Change preposition
about
In other words
, working for a company
or organization required greater responsibility and higher Correct your spelling
teamwork
team work
skills, Correct your spelling
teamwork
thus
, it will feel lot
more pressure working for a Correct article usage
a lot
company
. For instance
, a youtuber
doesn’t need to follow the working time of a Correct your spelling
YouTuber
Youtuber
company
, and they don’t require a lot of communication with their peers. Therefore
, they might feel less
Change the quantifier
fewer
Replace the word
stress
stresses
.
Correct your spelling
stressed
Secondly
, the advance of technology has been allowed people
to do what they like to do. Like the social media of Youtube and Tiktok. These platforms payed
Correct your spelling
paid
very
high Correct article usage
a very
salary
for Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
Add an article
the creator
a creator
creator
, Fix the agreement mistake
creators
thus
, even they don’t have a
official job, they still can do Change the article
an
this
for living. For example
, great artists can upload their works to the internet and someone will sponsor them for advertisement. That’s why more and more people
chose to be a freelancer.
I would said
the biggest disadvantage of being self-employed is that they don’t have a sustainable income. when they are running out of talents, they might lose their ways of living. Change the verb form
say
For instance
, when the fan number of a youtuber
is dropping, Correct your spelling
YouTuber
Youtuber
then
this
youtuber
might lose his sponsor.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
YouTuber
Youtuber
i
believe more and more Change the capitalization
I
people
choose to be self-employed has more positive effects than it’s
Change the verb form
it draws
draw back
, and it is a good way to increase job employment.Correct your spelling
drawback
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...