More and more people are moving to big cities these days. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city.
In today's contemporary world, masses are migrating towards
the
metropolitan Correct article usage
apply
cities
. I have compelling Use synonyms
evidences
to dwell on Change the wording
evidence
pieces of evidence
shreds of evidence
this
notion. Linking Words
This
essay explains both sides, the merits Linking Words
such
as more exposure to facilities including schools, universities, hospitals and the demerits, availing Linking Words
such
facilities Linking Words
needs
shelling out more money and facing Change the verb form
need
health
crisis due to polluted environment.
On the brighter Add an article
a health
side
, Use synonyms
one
question that includes me Use synonyms
what
are the possible merits of migrating to metro Add a missing verb
is what
cities
? Use synonyms
Firstly
, living in a big Linking Words
city
brings Use synonyms
the
plentiful opportunities to the people. Correct article usage
apply
In other words
, Linking Words
one
could access world-class education either at schools or universities due to a wide range of options available in the developed Use synonyms
cities
. To be precise, Mumbai, Use synonyms
one
of the biggest metropolitan Use synonyms
Use synonyms
city
in India has more than five universities ranking in Fix the agreement mistake
cities
top
50 of the world. In continuation, about positives, being in a big Correct article usage
the top
city
, thanks to all state of Use synonyms
arts
infrastructure development inexorable increase in IT industry hubs, profound growth of manufacturing plants people Change the noun form
art
gets
tons of job employment opportunities which results in improved financial stability.
On the other Change the verb form
get
side
, Use synonyms
unfortunately
Add a comma
,unfortunately
such
development is accompanied by a few demerits. For Linking Words
one
thing, in order to reside in a Use synonyms
city
, Use synonyms
one
has to shell out extra bucks. People, Use synonyms
for instance
, pay house rent three times higher than the small town. On top of it, expenses related to food, transport, medical treatment Linking Words
empty
Add a missing verb
are empty
once
Correct your spelling
one
Change preposition
in pockets
pockets
. Another darker Fix the agreement mistake
pocket
side
of living in metro Use synonyms
cities
is that the issue of pollution. Use synonyms
Polluted
environment in the Correct article usage
A polluted
city
not only affects Use synonyms
one
’s pulmonary breathing capacityUse synonyms
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
carries the threat of cardiac diseases Linking Words
such
as ischemic heart problems.
In a nutshell, there is definitely a good Linking Words
side
of moving to the big Use synonyms
cities
to explore better life and job opportunities, Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
one
should be Use synonyms
also
mindful of accompanied darker sides Linking Words
such
as more expenses as well as the threat of pollution related to Linking Words
health
crisis.Add an article
a health
the health
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...