More and more people are moving to big cities these days. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city.

In today's contemporary world, masses are migrating towards
the
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metropolitan
cities
. I have compelling
evidences
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evidence
pieces of evidence
shreds of evidence

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to dwell on
this
notion.
This
essay explains both sides, the merits
such
as more exposure to facilities including schools, universities, hospitals and the demerits, availing
such
facilities
needs
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shelling out more money and facing
health
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crisis due to polluted environment. On the brighter
side
,
one
question that includes me
what
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are the possible merits of migrating to metro
cities
?
Firstly
, living in a big
city
brings
the
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plentiful opportunities to the people.
In other words
,
one
could access world-class education either at schools or universities due to a wide range of options available in the developed
cities
. To be precise, Mumbai,
one
of the biggest metropolitan
city
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cities

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in India has more than five universities ranking in
top
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the top

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50 of the world. In continuation, about positives, being in a big
city
, thanks to all state of
arts
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art

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infrastructure development inexorable increase in IT industry hubs, profound growth of manufacturing plants people
gets
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tons of job employment opportunities which results in improved financial stability. On the other
side
,
unfortunately
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,unfortunately

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such
development is accompanied by a few demerits. For
one
thing, in order to reside in a
city
,
one
has to shell out extra bucks. People,
for instance
, pay house rent three times higher than the small town. On top of it, expenses related to food, transport, medical treatment
empty
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once
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in pockets

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pockets
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pocket

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. Another darker
side
of living in metro
cities
is that the issue of pollution.
Polluted
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environment in the
city
not only affects
one
’s pulmonary breathing capacity
,
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but
also
carries the threat of cardiac diseases
such
as ischemic heart problems. In a nutshell, there is definitely a good
side
of moving to the big
cities
to explore better life and job opportunities,
however
,
one
should be
also
mindful of accompanied darker sides
such
as more expenses as well as the threat of pollution related to
health
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a health
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crisis.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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