Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems , as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is said that lacking skill in understanding and being able to speak in the native

language

can cause not only serious social

problems

but

also

practical

problems

. I strongly agree that

this

can lead to serious social

problems

such

as bullying and practical

problems

such

as medical miscommunication.

Firstlya

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Firstly

Firstly a

lack of native

language

skills can cause bullying.

That is

, a

person

can get bullied by others or the native speaker because that

person

can not speak that

language

due to their

accents

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Moreover

, because the

person

can not fully understand all of the meaning in that

language

then

bullying their ability for comprehensiveness happens.

For example

, one of my friends who was an exchange student

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got bullied by her classmates about her accent and the way she communicated with others because she did not have strong

language

skills,

Furthermore

, not understanding the native

language

can lead to medical miscommunication.

That is

, there are specific words for medical or symptoms which many visitors to a country would not know in the

second

language

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so that if they fail to explain or communicate what they feel or why they hurt, it might lead to the wrong treatment.

For instance

, if someone in a

foriegn

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foreign

land has a reaction to a known allergen

such

as tomatoes but they can not clearly explain their symptoms or why they are hurt,

then

they can get the wrong medication or treatment. In conclusion, I believe that when a

person

has to travel or live in a country where they can not fully understand the local

language

, they face serious social and practical

problems

. So, I recommend trying to learn and improve

language

skills before arriving in that country to at least help reduce those

problems

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