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The line graph represents the
amount
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of
coffee
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exports in
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in Brazil, Columbia and Costa Rica from 2002 to 2012. Overall, the
coffee
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export in Brazil showed an upward
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between 2002 and 2012.
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, Columbia showed a downward
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with some fluctuations over the same period. An interesting
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evident in the graph is that in
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year
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2002 and 2006 11
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coffee
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was exported in Brazil. It showed a significant rise with little fluctuation and went up to 25
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in 2006.
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, Costa Rica showed a downward
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while
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coffee
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trade of 15
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went down to 7kg from 2002 to 2006. After
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, it peaked at 20
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in
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six years.
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, Columbia started to sell from 5
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and increased up to 11
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over the year 2002 to 2006.
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, it showed a downward
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only 2
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coffee
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was exported between 2006 and 2008. It rose up dramatically.
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, 15
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was exported by the end of the period 2012.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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