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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is said that
music
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 is a universal language and it has no barriers with respect to countries,
cultures
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 or
age
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. It is claimed that
music
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 has helped in bringing
people
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 of varied
cultures
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 and ages together and in my
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 is true as
music
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 has intrigued
people
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 to learn about other
cultures
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 and connect with
people
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 from all
age
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 groups.
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, the majority of
people
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 love listening to
music
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, there would be a very minority population who do not prefer listening to
music
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. With the advancement of technology, all forms of
music
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 composed in different parts of the world are available to everyone due to which
people
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 now are no more listening only to folk
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 but are
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 enjoying
music
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 composed in other parts of the world.
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,
people
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 are
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 travelling to those places to attend concerts of their favourite band and singers.
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,
people
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 from all parts of the world, attend
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 concert named “Tomorrow land” where all the famous singers perform.
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,
music
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 is enjoyed by
people
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 of all
age
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 groups be it teenagers or senior citizens, and sharing a similar taste in
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 results in reducing the
age
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 barriers between them.
People
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 are usually in a happy state of mind when listening to
music
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 and when they listen to
music
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 together they easily connect with each other.
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, in India, families when they meet at festivals or weddings they sing songs and enjoy
music
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 together which
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 makes them more comfortable with each other. To conclude, it is a famous saying that, a person is more compatible with someone who has a similar taste in
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 like his and
music
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 definitely helps to connect
people
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 from different
cultures
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 and generations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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