Some people consider thinking about and planning for the future to be a waste of time. They argue that people should simply live in the moment. Do you agree or disagree?

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people
always think and
plan
for their future to be a waste of time, the other
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should normally live in the present. In my opinion, I disagree, the reasons will be detailed as the following. On the one hand, if
people
have a
plan
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the future, they will follow
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their
plans
. If we look at
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ourselves
when we were young, the teacher asked us that what is
your
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dream.
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, sometimes there was a project
to
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us
for
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writinh
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our dreams,
such
as occupations, places to work, money, and draw a photo for
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explanation
explaining
.
Therefore
, we are
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by the teacher which had to think forward in the future.
For instance
, when we were young, if we would like to be a doctor, it means that we should
to
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pay attention
for
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reading more playing a game. In
particularly
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, we should
to
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choose specific subjects,
such
as maths, science, physics, and biology.
Therefore
,
plannng
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planning
to be a doctor has a lot of content to do, and it is easier life because there is
plan
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.
On the other hand
, it
crucial
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for
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planning
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planing
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, when
people
meet a fail from
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one thing. It is
safely
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than does not have any
plans
. The changing of life
is always happened
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. It is beneficial if we have a lot of
plans
when we are doing something,
such
a running a business, purchasing a house, selling a product on the internet, and
surpising
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surprising
someone.
However
, if someone
need
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to sell the products on the internet by trend, it is better when they have
plans
for finding the special products to sell.
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first
of all, they should
think
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make
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the customer
a customer
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customer
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customers
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to interested
of
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their things.
For example
, the marketing should
plan
for creating the promotion make and do the cover of products
diffently
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differently
. In conclusion, planning is essential before
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to do anything. In my
opinion
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people
should waste
of
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time
for
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thinking. It can decrease some of
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because there
is
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other ways to follow.
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