You hired a car from a company, while you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. In your letter: When and where you hired it Describe how the accident happened What kind of action did you take after the accident

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are doing great. I am writing

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letter to give you the information about the car which I hired from you on Monday, 20th August from Brampton. Unfortunately, I had an accident early morning at Windsor. Let me explain the whole situation.

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, I was travelling from Windsor University to London City by 8 am on Wednesday. When I stopped the car at the traffic lights someone hit my vehicle from the back.

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, it was not my mistake as the other person did not control and I called the police as it was not my fault. When the policeman came to the incident, he

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agreed that it was covered by the insurance company of the other driver. Could you please provide me with the other motor car? As I have to visit the area of London and complete my trip of one week. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Love

tajinder.panagSat Jan 20 2024

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Task Achievement

To improve task response, ensure that all aspects of the prompt are addressed fully. Include specific details about the car and the accident, and be clear about the actions taken.

Task Achievement

Maintain a more formal tone throughout the letter, suitable for correspondence with a business. Avoid casual language and sign off with a full name for professional communication.

Coherence and Cohesion

Structure your letter in clear paragraphs, each dedicated to a specific aspect of the situation. Aim for a logical flow of information from the introduction to the conclusion.

Coherence and Cohesion

Use appropriate linking words or phrases to create a smooth transition between sentences and paragraphs, reinforcing the cohesion of your writing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

162 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rented
agreement number
accident
incident
collision
damage
fault
insurance
liability
emergency services
report
evidence
witnesses
contact details
repair
compensation
notify
immediate action
circumstances
chronological order
weather conditions
traffic
cooperate
return
reference number

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