Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the
governments
should mainly take control of the
research
related to science than the private
companies
. I partly agree with
this
statement, and I will give my opinions in
this
essay. On the one hand, scientific
research
may cause harmful results and affect the living of citizens, so government play a vital role to ensure the security
for
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their residents.
For instance
, nuclear experiments are dangerous
research
if not be controlled by
governments
and they should be the only ones who keep the secret formulas about developing nuclear.
Moreover
,
governments
will not take advantages for themselves, they are trying to share the successful
research
equally to human in order to bring the same opportunities for everyone who
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it. For
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example, the head of developed countries helps to improve the living standard of poor areas through their inventions or give the poor people to reach a high-quality
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education.
On the other hand
,
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private
companies
have good abilities to improve the quality of
product
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through their huge financial sources.
Vaccine
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is a strong example
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this
situation. Many big medical
companies
are competing together to produce their own vaccines during
Covid-19
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pandemic. That helps to push
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creativity and
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motivation because the inventors are paid
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amount
money
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for their effort. These employees have the motivation
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improve their products and try
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best to bring a good result for others.
Besides
,
governments
depends
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much on taxes or funds from
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normal people, so they can be limited to develop or encourage others for scientific
research
. It may take a long time to raise enough money for a potential program about science and it can be missed the good moment
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. In my conclusion,
governments
and private
companies
should support
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each other to bring
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benefits for man.
However
, the experiments related to the safety of
human
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should be taken care
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governments
.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific research
  • government oversight
  • ethical guidelines
  • public interest
  • public funding
  • transparency
  • widespread access
  • long-term societal benefits
  • profit motive
  • biased findings
  • restricted research
  • collaboration
  • bureaucratic delays
  • political influence
  • innovation
  • regulations
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