in some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. what are the causes? what can be done to address this situation?
There is information that the youth generation has gained their income, health, and wellbeing status;
however
, the level of their contentment is low in some countries. I would argue Linking Words
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of all, chief among the causes of Linking Words
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problem is the lifestyle of the young society. They are only spending their time focusing on pursuing their future career, in order to get rich earlier and increase their wellbeing at a young age. Linking Words
As a result
, they become more individual, do not have any friends and are not satisfied enough with their achievements. To illustrate it, the millennials generation in Japan are the busiest workers in the world, most of them inclined to get married and raise a child. Linking Words
Therefore
, they feel unpleasant and lonely, even though they have a lot of money and are healthy. Linking Words
Secondly
, most young people obtain their happiness with temporary things. Linking Words
For instance
, buy an expensive item and dinner in a luxury restaurant.
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Furthermore
, occupying themselves with social lives is one of the solutions. By joining these activities, they will make new friends and learn new things which will make them happier. Linking Words
For example
, join a volunteering activity and community events. Linking Words
Besides
that, enjoyment can be obtained by doing sports. The researcher said that sport releases the hormone of pleasure and Linking Words
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make a healthy body, Linking Words
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as playing basketball, football, or just running.
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solution will not show an impact in a short time. Linking Words
However
, joining social activities and doing sports exercises will make millennials content enough.Linking Words
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