In many countries smoking in now illegal in public places. Do you agree or disagree?

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smoking is a very common habit in some nations, some others have restricted

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action in public locations. I completely agree with the latter mentioned issue and believe that

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phenomenon should be prohibited due to its destructive impacts that would be discussed in

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essay.

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, smoking could lead to major health issues. In fact,

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matter affects society well-being as well.

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, smoking can cause significant diseases not only for the smoker but

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for the people around. It is even said that the ones who breathe

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smoke are affected more than the smoker. They can suffer from intense illnesses

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as lung cancer, asthma and so on.

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why smoking is considered harmful for the whole population who are exposed to its pollution.

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habit and its drawbacks could be accentuated as it can give rise to other types of addiction. Whenever smokers are asked for the reason why they smoke, they mention that they do

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in order to be relaxed.

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, many traders are professional smokers who try to relieve from tensions and pressures of trading through smoking.

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addictive habit would be ineffective after some time, as our body would get used to it.

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, there is no choice other than

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drugs, alcohol and

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other addictive manner.

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way, using various types of drugs to overcome inverse situations, these people would face a circumstance that they could not easily get rid of.

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, in turn, destroys many lives and

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result in less safety in society. In conclusion, considering smoking as an illegal act is a proper rule in my opinion, since

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matter could affect human's lives and safety by its destructive impacts

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as health disorders and indulging in drugs. All in all, smoking should not be treated as an individual choice, as it has major effects on society as well.

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