Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugar products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that many foods and drink products are often contained high levels of

sugar

, nowadays. In that case, there can cause many health problems. Many

people

think that

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

sugar

productions should be made more expensive products to support

people

to eat less

sugar

. Form my point of view, I disagree with

this

viewpoint for many reasons which will be outlined in the detail in the following paragraph. On the one hand,

people

think that the higher

price

of

sugar

can reduce many health problems

such

as the obesity problem due to many food goods

tend

Correct pronoun usage

that tend

show examples

to use

sugar

as an ingredient.

For example

, many

people

are often drinking

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

instant coffee which

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

mixing with

sugar

before they go to work in the morning. If

sugar

is more expensive in the markets, it will lead to an increase in the

price

of

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

instant coffee as well.

However

, the higher

price

of

sugar

can offer advantages to some parts

in

Change preposition

of

show examples

the community like the

sugar

industries, the

sugar

markets and the

sugar

agriculture.

On the other hand

, other persons say that when

sugar

is expensive, they can consume others

which

Correct pronoun usage

that

show examples

are produced to replace

sugar

.

For instance

, many humans who are dieting from food and drink that contain a lot of

sugar

are often consuming the honey from bees to replace

sugar

.

Additionally

, many researchers believe that

sugar

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

not the only reason

people

become obese, but consuming too much starch and meat can

also

cause many health issues. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with

this

viewpoint because increasing the

price

of

sugar

is not the right solution, for it can lead to

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

dramatic economic issues in some countries.

Therefore

, it is recommended that the governments should provide some policies and encourage citizens to consume nutritious food in the right way.