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International marketing is sometimes seen as invasive and an intrusion into the country in question. Others argue that it is a necessary and economical form of education in addition to spreading ideas, language and culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In the recent decade, the debate regarding international marketing has been raised. Some
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 see that multicultural marketing is an invasive method in our community.
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, Other
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 claim that it is an essential part of our society in order to gain new ideas, language and culture. I believe that international marketing is an innovation tool and its pros outweigh the cons.
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, some
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 argue that the new marketing methodology is destroying our society values. As a consequence, we can see more and more teenagers are trying to mimic the western lifestyle.
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, they are trying to buy the same clothes and shoes, and pay too much attention to materialistic things.
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, the new international marketing is not considering our national interests. Consider the example of marketing for products that are competitive to our national products.
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, some
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 view global marketing as a tool to understand other
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 cultures and languages.
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, we will learn more knowledge and skills.
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, we can learn new ideas and innovations in order to implement them in our country.
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 will enrich our economy.
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, we can learn more about new construction solutions available in the world market
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 implement them in our region. In conclusion, global marketing is a great new marketing strategy, that has a great benefit to our economy. As it gives us an innovative idea to implement in our homeland. Despite, other
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 claim that it is a threat to our national products as well as to our social values. I believe that international marketing has advantages more than its disadvantages.

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