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Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem.

#overpopulation #world
The majority of a people believes that excess public is
one
 of the key
factor
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 for sphere concerns. I completely agree with
this
 opinion
becuase
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because
 a tremendous amount of
public
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the public
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 has
poluted
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polluted
 the planet,
this
 has
acelerated
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accelerated
the
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apply
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global warming and deforestation.
First
 and
formost
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foremost
for most
, I
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believe
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belive
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believe
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one
 of the most undesirable
problem
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problems
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 due
the
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 extra citizen is
increase
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an increase
the increase
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 in
temprature
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temperature
, with every passing year our place is getting warmer. The more resident
dwell
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dwells
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 in
one
 place, the more trash is dumped without proper
segrigation
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segregation
. To decompose it
athourities
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authorities
 burn the garbage which
include
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 materials
responsinble
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responsible
 for
emmitting
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emitting
carbon-di- oxide
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carbon-dioxide
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 in
air
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the air
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, and CO2 is
one
 of the primary
factor
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factors
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 of global warming .
For instance
,
population
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the population
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 of
Mumabi
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Mumbai
 has
increasd
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increased
68
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by 68
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 % in
last
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the last
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 two decades.
Therefore
, trash burning has surged over
the
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time.
As a result
, the annual
temprature
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temperature
is
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in
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this
 region is 4.5
degreee
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degree
degrees
 higher.
Secondly
, the excess citizen has
damanged
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damaged
 the habitat by increasing the deforestation .A large number of people means the higher the
deamnd
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demand
demands
 of lands where they can stay with their
familes
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families
 .
Hence
, the larger number of forests are transformed into places where cities are built with housing societies .To illustrate, Banglore is the IT hub in
Inida
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India
 , every year millions of people
miragte
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migrate
mirage
their
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there
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 from other parts of
country
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the country
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. Housing demand of
banglore
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Bangalore
Banglore
 has increased in
last
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the last
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 5 years , in order to meet demand and provide home real estate sector has vanished 100 acres of forest land to construct residential towers. To conclude, I strongly
belive
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believe
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 that increase in population is worst issue
concering
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concerning
 the
enviornment
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environment
. As it
act
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acts
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 as
catalyst
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a catalyst
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 for issues like global warming and deforestation on our planet .In
future
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,future
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 it is expected the world population will increase so the government should run the education
progams
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programs
 for their citizen about
envionment
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environment
environmental
 degradation.
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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