Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using social networking applications.

Nowadays, many people are using social

media

. Thereby, you can contact

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your audience who live far away.

On the other hand

, everyone is using social applications so sometimes you can receive a negative comment and

also

, the time you spend on networks will increase.

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essay will discuss

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the positive and negative things by using social

media

. In today’s world, technology has developed so every person can post or join social

media

networks. Due to

this

, individuals can contact

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the audiences.

This

means that people who want to be famous and want to look at them, are easy to get popular.

In addition

, things we do like go shopping, school, or gym can be done

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online.

As a result

, no more worry about going outside.

However

, using the internet will cause a problem.

For example

, as previously mentioned above,

lot

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of audiences are watching

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thing

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that

contributor

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contributors

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posted on the

media

,

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if the

contribute

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was

bad

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a bad

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impression by

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the listener

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listener

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listeners

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and they can comment negatively. These things will make contributors feel sad.

Furthermore

, social networks are huge, so the time you spend on

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will increase. For

this

purpose, the time for daily routine will

broke

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. In conclusion, social

media

is good for hobbies and daily life, but it will

also

damage your daily routine and feelings.

Nevertheless

, social applications are useful, people are using them a lot nowadays.