In many countries crimes rates amongst younger people has been rising. Discuss the causes and solutions for this

Nowadays, a large number of crimes are increasing tremendously among the youths in several

countries

.

This

essay

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will

discuss the main causes of

this

problem including lack of

job

opportunities and financial

unstabalities

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instabilities

.

This

essay

will

also

suggest some measures

can

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that can

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be taken to reduce

this

unemployment and financial issues.

To begin

with,

young

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the young

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generation always

try

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to find some good

job

after their studies. But, lack of

job

opportunities may

affected

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affect

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to

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juveniles badly. If someone completed their qualifications with distinction merits

although

they face

lot

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of difficulties to find a suitable

job

.

As a result

of

this

youngers

have to face economical injurious impacts.

On the other hand

, they

have

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not enough money to

fulfill

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fulfil

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their needs and they can not

lookafter

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look after

their parents

by

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with

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their hands. These facts cause to build up teenagers with cruel emotions

such

as angry, hesitations. To illustrates that, according to the survey conducted by Harvard University, it has been found that, many poorest

countries

crime rates increased than other developed

countries

.

However

, government and other responsible authorities can drop these problems by regulating their laws and new economic projects.

Specifically

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government can generate

job

vacancies.

Nonetheless

, they have to plan many projects to promote

self employment

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self-employment

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. People can tend their young generation to

doing

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some sports, entertainment events, meditations and other religious works.

Therefore

,

youngers

can develop their skills, improve their personality and they can wash their brains properly.

For instance

,

in

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Finland's parliament represents their cabinets by youths than

olders

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holders

older

. In conclusion, in many

countries

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,countries

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crime rates are highly increase amongst

youngers

.

This

essay

discussed how lack of jobs and financial menaces are often caused by increasing criminal activities among the

youngers

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younger

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.

On the other hand

,

this

essay

also

suggested that government have to play a huge role to prevent

this

situation.