Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs(for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that unpaid community

services

should be a mandatory subject of a

second

-grade program. I personally agree with

this

because of many reasons.

To begin

with, I personally believe that learning should not be in only the school, students should have to develop their life

skills

. Voluntary work can help for

this

point, It offers many

skills

,

such

as teamwork, communication

skills

, problem-solving

skills

and time management.

For example

, when the students have to go somewhere they have not been, they have to work with people that have not met before,

therefore

, the communications

skills

will be developed. For another example, there is an activity that to join as a team, the direction is they have finished up something in time, from

this

incident, teamwork

skills

and time management

skills

will be developed

Additionally

, the unpaid

services

also

help the volunteers finding themselves and what they are good at, For example, they can teach younger children about football, the physical education teacher is suited for them,

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if they are good at playing music for charity, Musician is appropriate to them.

Moreover

, voluntary

services

also

help the volunteer to be more confident. In conclusion. I strongly agree that voluntary

services

should be a compulsory part of high school because they offer many benefits to the participants and those

skills

they will get from these activities will be useful for their future.