You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include Where you stayed What the problems were How they can fix your complaints

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Dear Sir or Madam,
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am writing to express my concern about
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appealing
appaling
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the appaling
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condition of
room
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no 505 at your hotel ' The
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matrix
whre
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where
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stayed for 3 nights with my company. There are several issues which are simply
unaccecptable
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unacceptable
.
Firstly
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, there was a
grifitty
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gritty
on the wall and I think
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has been the case for
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of weeks now.
Secondly
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, the floor was
alwasy
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always
dirty which lead me a question whether a cleaner is
oeven
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even
employed there.
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,
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is a putrid
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odour
which
purmute
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permute
promote
the
room
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and
this
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was extremely
unpleasent
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unpleasant
. To address the situation, I would strongly advise
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a full refreshment of the
room
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as well as employed a regular cleaner for
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room
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. In
adition
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addition
to that, it would be
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idea if you can assign a person who can monitor the cleaning process regularly. Yours faithfully, Arif Mahamud
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Word Count

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with...
  • ...which I encountered during my recent stay at...
  • The first issue was...
  • Additionally, I found that...
  • Moreover, the... was not up to standard.
  • I suggest that...
  • This experience has left me...
  • I hope you will address these concerns promptly by...
  • To improve your service, you could...
  • As a form of compensation, I would appreciate...
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