Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons and disadvantages of this trend?

The world is changing a lot than the previous time and the living standard of people is improving.
Therefore
, many people choose to live differently versus their parents, and marrying lately or having
children
later is one of
different
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things. There are some reasons to lead
this
phenomenon and
also
bring the negative effect to
society
.
Firstly
, the youth are living in
the
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modern and peaceful world
that is
safer in the period
time
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of time
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of their parents who may suffer in war.
Therefore
, the young generation
do
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not have the pressure about giving
the
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birth to create the
labor
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for servicing the
country
.
For instance
, my grandmother had ten
children
and more a half of them died in the military, but in my mother's generation, each family has two or three kids and no more.
Secondly
,
woman
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women
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are received
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have received
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an education equally with men, so they have many purposes to achieve like success in career path, follow their dream, etc. Girls are not limited anymore about being a standard mother to be fit to the
society'
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standards or having more opportunities to get higher education.
On the other hand
,
this
trend
cause
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causes
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some disadvantages for
women
and
society
. Having
children
lately will cause some dangerous consequences for
women
's health.
Besides
, the worst thing is many
women
are unable to be pregnant after forty years old. To illustrate
this
, my cousin sister had to receive a child from other
women
because she was forty-two at that time and she had no the ability to give a baby by herself.
Furthermore
,
this
trend makes the families have one child because of their age and that lead to the decreasing population of the
country
. Japan is the
country
that facing
to
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the lowest rate of young employees in their history, they have to make many benefits to encourage
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the family
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family
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families
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to have more
children
. In conclusion, there are some factors that lead to the trend of deciding to have
children
later in
society
and it impacts few negative aspects for each
women
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woman
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and the
country
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritization
  • financial stability
  • educational prospects
  • personal development
  • health advancements
  • fertility options
  • economic uncertainties
  • parenthood
  • societal norms
  • life experience
  • generational gap
  • upbringing
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