Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons and disadvantages of this trend?

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The world is changing a lot than the previous time and the living standard of people is improving.
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, many people choose to live differently versus their parents, and marrying lately or having
children
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later is one of
different
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things. There are some reasons to lead
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phenomenon and
also
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bring the negative effect to
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.
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, the youth are living in
the
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modern and peaceful world
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safer in the period
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of their parents who may suffer in war.
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, the young generation
do
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not have the pressure about giving
the
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birth to create the
labor
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for servicing the
country
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.
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, my grandmother had ten
children
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and more a half of them died in the military, but in my mother's generation, each family has two or three kids and no more.
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,
woman
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women
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are received
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an education equally with men, so they have many purposes to achieve like success in career path, follow their dream, etc. Girls are not limited anymore about being a standard mother to be fit to the
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society'
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standards or having more opportunities to get higher education.
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,
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trend
cause
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some disadvantages for
women
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and
society
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. Having
children
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lately will cause some dangerous consequences for
women
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's health.
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, the worst thing is many
women
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are unable to be pregnant after forty years old. To illustrate
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, my cousin sister had to receive a child from other
women
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because she was forty-two at that time and she had no the ability to give a baby by herself.
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,
this
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trend makes the families have one child because of their age and that lead to the decreasing population of the
country
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. Japan is the
country
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that facing
to
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the lowest rate of young employees in their history, they have to make many benefits to encourage
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the family
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family
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families
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to have more
children
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. In conclusion, there are some factors that lead to the trend of deciding to have
children
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later in
society
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and it impacts few negative aspects for each
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women
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woman
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and the
country
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritization
  • financial stability
  • educational prospects
  • personal development
  • health advancements
  • fertility options
  • economic uncertainties
  • parenthood
  • societal norms
  • life experience
  • generational gap
  • upbringing
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