Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons and disadvantages of this trend?
The world is changing a lot than the previous time and the living standard of people is improving.
Therefore
, many people choose to live differently versus their parents, and marrying lately or having children
later is one of different
things. There are some reasons to lead Add an article
the different
this
phenomenon and also
bring the negative effect to society
.
Firstly
, the youth are living in the
modern and peaceful world Correct article usage
a
that is
safer in the period time
of their parents who may suffer in war. Change preposition
of time
Therefore
, the young generation do
not have the pressure about giving Change the verb form
does
the
birth to create the Correct article usage
apply
labor
for servicing the Change the spelling
labour
country
. For instance
, my grandmother had ten children
and more a half of them died in the military, but in my mother's generation, each family has two or three kids and no more. Secondly
, woman
Fix the agreement mistake
women
are received
an education equally with men, so they have many purposes to achieve like success in career path, follow their dream, etc. Girls are not limited anymore about being a standard mother to be fit to the Change the verb form
have received
society'
standards or having more opportunities to get higher education.
Correct your spelling
society's
On the other hand
, this
trend cause
some disadvantages for Change the verb form
causes
women
and society
. Having children
lately will cause some dangerous consequences for women
's health. Besides
, the worst thing is many women
are unable to be pregnant after forty years old. To illustrate this
, my cousin sister had to receive a child from other women
because she was forty-two at that time and she had no the ability to give a baby by herself. Furthermore
, this
trend makes the families have one child because of their age and that lead to the decreasing population of the country
. Japan is the country
that facing to
the lowest rate of young employees in their history, they have to make many benefits to encourage Change preposition
apply
Add an article
the family
family
to have more Fix the agreement mistake
families
children
.
In conclusion, there are some factors that lead to the trend of deciding to have children
later in society
and it impacts few negative aspects for each women
and the Change to a singular noun
woman
country
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