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In many countries, prison is the most common solution to the problem of crime. However, another effective way is to provide people with better education so that they cannot become criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, there are many different methods to discipline the
offenders
 who commit a
crime
, putting them into prison is considered to be the most common way.
However
, some argue that providing better
education
 to all the
people
 can prevent them from being
offenders
. The problem of which one is more effective remains to be discussed. On the one hand, prison plays an essential role in the system of social justice. It is generally accepted that almost every country has
prisons
 to keep the
offenders
.
Prisons
 not only provide a place for
offenders
 to realize how serious their crimes are by the sentences
,
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 but
also
 a place for them to rehabilitate.
Also
,
prisons
 help
making
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the
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society safer since the
people
 who commit
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a crime
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crime
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crimes
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 were put into certain places. Meanwhile, they can obtain certain skills to make a
live
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 after imprisonment.
On the other hand
, providing
people
 with better
education
 is important, but I doubt that even with better
education
, the criminals on earth would not disappear.
In other words
, better
education
 should not necessarily lead to a
no-
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crime
-world. Generally speaking, well-educated
people
 may understand the importance of law and social justice and
less
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are less
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 likely to break the laws.
However
, there are still many
offenders
 with high educational
background
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backgrounds
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.
For example
, some
cyber crimes
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cybercrimes
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 require the
offenders
 a higher ability to manipulate the
datas
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data
 or some financial crimes can lead to a huge
lost
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loss
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 to
a
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society. To conclude, I believe
prisons
 is an indispensable part in our social justice since it could help
educating
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to educate
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 the
offenders
 as well as keeping the society safer.
However
, it is undeniable that providing better
education
 to all the
people
 is significant,
still
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 I believe it is not the most effective way to minor
crime
. Both
education
 and prison are necessary when speaking of
crime
.
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