Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

One of the largest issues all over the world nowadays is the concern towards the

environment

. While some argue that

overpopulation

gives the most serious impact

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the

environment

, I personally do not think that

overpopulation

affects

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on its own, but rather the way in which human beings choose to live in their life brings several drawbacks against the greens. Turning to the transportation that

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deeply entwining with our daily activities,

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use

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of cars are obviously harmful to the

environment

due to exhaust fumes that will result in deforestation. The problem of

this

is not that

people

use automobiles frequently, but the fundamental issue is the fact that

people

opt

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even they have an alternative method for

commune

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that

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more eco-friendly to the

environment

.

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, one of the

city

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in Chiba in Japan introduced

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station taking into account

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the environmental concerns,

however

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the scheme was not well prevailed among the population since they prefer to use cars for their convenient reasons.

This

clearly

reflect

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the truth that

people

are likely to

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to choose

more

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easier way for

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sake.

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, it is

also

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that the economic system

is outweigh

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the

overpopulation

in term of the environmental problems. To be clear, even there are a few population or decrease

trend

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in one’s country, dependency on

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industrial activities for its economy harms the

environment

.

For instance

,

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population has been gradually decreasing over the two decades, but

on the other hand

,

environmental

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the environmental

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issue is not yet resolved. One of the main reasons

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this

is because

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economy is heavily relying on

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manufacturing and industry. As long as

people

requires

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more and more in terms of quantity and quality, factories would continue to run with exhaust fumes for 24 hours 365 days.

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example as well clearly demonstrates that humankind’s inherent traits for better life

creates

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issues against

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natures

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.

As

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the

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conclusion, I do not agree with the view that

overpopulation

is the most critical

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for the environmental issue. The problem comes from the way of living by humans.