In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed. What is your opinion about this?

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Imposing certain restrictions on

teenagers

is being made an important aspect of

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routine. In few parts of

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the US

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, restricting youngsters from not going out after

certain

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time

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night

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the night

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without being accompanied by an adult has been made effective which is being known as "

curfew

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essay will discuss

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how

this

practice would be beneficial to

teenagers

and how it could cause

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an issue

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issue

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issues

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for certain youth. Recently survey conducted in

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the US

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proves that 40% of crimes happen at

night

and many children trafficking cases have been lodged at nighttime compared to morning time.

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, there are plenty

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food

centers

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across the cities, claiming to provide free food and drinks after 10 P.M

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night

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and

this

would definitely attract

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of youth who are trying to save some bugs. Implementing

curfew

night

, which makes it mandatory to have an adult accompanied by

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would help parents to protect their children and

also

provide them guidance on what preventive measures are to be taken going out at

night

even in future. On other hand, applying

curfew

can

also

be an issue for few

teenagers

who do

night

shift jobs.

Also

, the more you impose

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a restriction

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restriction

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restrictions

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, the more

teenagers

would find ways to break them

such

as sneaking out from home at

midnights

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midnight

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. Parents should start spending more time with children and find easy as well as effective

way

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of restricting things around them. Implementing restrictions is good in most cases but

also

has its own flaws.

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essay has discussed both

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and negative

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of imposing

curfew

night

and in my opinion restriction on certain things should start from childhood in a family and should not

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until rules are imposed by

government

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the government

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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed. What is your opinion about this?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people say that shops should sell food products that are made in the local area whenever possible rather than foods that are imported from other countries. Do you agree or disagree?

In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is a lack of sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. WHy is this?Do you think it is positive or negative development?

Some people believe that sports are an essential part of school life for children while you should give reasons for your answers and include. ideas and examples

The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?