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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult

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Imposing certain restrictions on
teenagers
 is being made an important aspect of the parental routine. In few parts of
US
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the US
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, restricting youngsters from not going out after a certain time in the
night
 without being accompanied by an adult has been made effective which is being known as "
curfew
".
This
 essay will discuss how
this
 practice would be beneficial to
teenagers
 and how it could cause issues for certain youth. Recently survey conducted in
US
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the US
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 proves that 40% of crimes happen at
night
 and many children trafficking cases have been lodged at nighttime compared to morning time.
Also
, there are plenty of fast food centres across the cities, claiming to provide free food and drinks after 10 P.M in
the
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night
 and
this
 would definitely attract a lot of youth who are trying to save some bugs. Implementing
curfew
 at
night
, which makes it mandatory to have an adult accompanied by
teenager
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 would help parents to protect their children and
also
 provide them guidance on what preventive measures are to be taken going out at
night
 even in future. On other hand, applying
curfew
 can
also
 be an issue for few
teenagers
 who do
night
 shift jobs.
Also
, the more you impose restrictions, the more
teenagers
 would find ways to break them
such
 as sneaking out from home at midnight. Parents should start spending more time with children and find easy as well as effective ways of restricting things around them. Implementing restrictions is good in most cases but
also
 has its own flaws.
This
 essay has discussed both the positive and negative sides of imposing
curfew
 at
night
 and in my opinion restriction on certain things should start from childhood in a family and should not wait until rules are imposed by the government.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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